surprised!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

it was burning in chest, stomach is moving upside down,
like everything will come out.
he always felt nauseated whenever he met her.

its a surprise visit for her,
he just want to support her and  keep her smiling.
he dont know whether she will be there or not.
even he dont know whether he will find her ? .
he dont know how he will locate her because if he ask her then it's not a surprise
its just a plain risk, driving is hot especially in summers.
carrying a bag on his lanky body, he park his bike at PGI parking.

Its was his first time at AIIMS.
first he dont know what he should do.
why he came here? shall he call her.?
will she ever understand my love , my purpose of coming there?
amidst of all such questions flooding his mind,
he gathered courage and went to enquiry office.

haan madam, ek enquiry karni karni hai?
madam: puchiye ?

Mr K  K Sharma ka ward number bata sakti hai?
madam: kya bimaari hai?

partial paralysis hai
madam: g ward 7th floor
thanks madam.

he was feeling uneasy but to see her reaction when she see find him?
will she smile, will she shout or may be her parents are there instead of her?
may be she was not there.
will she recognise what all effort he made to surprise her ?

AIIMS is very big , it reminds him of IITs huge concrete structures,
lots of  tree and well planned development.
the only difference  is presence of large crowd .

the journey from enquiry office to 7 th floor g block was insightful.
In moment of exhilaration , he used stair cases.
first time in his life carrying a bag  on his back , was a very tiring journey.
he really felt his lungs will exhaust,

lesson no 1:
yeh army wale bhi badey solid hote hai, kya stamina hota hai.
100 kilo ka wajan uthate hue bhi kitna lambey fasley kat dete hain..

he could felt his heartbeats and  he himself dont know
after how much time he had done such a physical activity.

it took five minutes to regain his senses.
more questions flooding his mind.

har jagah patient hai, kya bolenge.
kisi ne puch lia  patient se kya rishta hai, kya kahenge?

seriously he was feeling anxious and was going nuts.
idhar udhar dekha, thoda courage kiya ,move ahead.
he was numb at his first sight.

aise aise patient dekhe ki ,
bas kya bole pyaar out, philosphy in.
aisa manjar dekh kar na phat jati hai.
aadmi kya kabhie sochta hai ki woh aisi conditon main hoga.
my brain had a black out.

he was numb.

lesson no 2:
doctors are almost equivalent to god.


the place is driving him crazy.
he felt like vomiting

there are souls with life but no movement
 then he realized we always complain about life ,
but was his life really worth complaining?

sincerely we never count our blessings.
he really feel for her, how she spend her time here?
only silence, my love for her is increasing.


he cant find her.
she never even bothered to tell me how she feels coming here.
may be she has adjusted her to these circumstances.
he felt that  he could  never understand her.

pata nai kya chalta hai,
kuch batati bhi nahi hai.
but he love her............
now he was  SURPRISED !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lesson no 3:

never try to give lot of surprise because when life surprises you, you hardly like it.

last 4 hours flash in my mind.

PS:
1. its my first short story. AIIMS are one of reputated medical institutes in India.
2.thanks rahul for his critical review of my blog.