Wednesday, August 31, 2011

जाने कुछ छूट रहा है .............



एक  डर  लग  रहा  है

जाने   कुछ  छूट रहा है 


कुछ  धुंधला  सा  है  इन  नज़रों  मे ,

शायद   कोई  तो  है  अपनों  में.



अक्स  हो  मेरा  या  हो  मेरी  परछाई

क्यों  तुमने  अपनी  पहचान  छुपाई

कौन  हो  तुम  ये  बतलाओ,

कभी  तो  मुछसे  नज़र  मिलाओ ,

अब  इंतज़ार  न  कराओ ,


क्योंकि  ...........


पश्चाताप  भी  न  कर  पऊंगा

जो  एक  बार  खो  जऊंगा

डर   लगता  है  की  छूट  गया  तो  फिर  न  मिल  पऊंगा ,

लाख  जतन करूँगा   फिर  भी  वापस  न  आ  पऊंगा



दिल  न  जाने  क्या  ढूँन   रहा  है

लगता  है  कुछ  छूट  रहा  है

लगता  है  कुछ  छूट  रहा  है ......



Time:4:17 pm,31 August 2011

PS: for one who inspires me to write.

sorry for errors , will remove asap.

10 comments:

  1. sir aapki poem sahi mian bahut achhi hai .. i mean really lagta hai jaise aapne kisi ko yaad karke likha hua ... lekin muje lagta hai ki aapko chiaye thodi si aur padai .. agar aap chahian .. toh Sri Aurobindo ki poems pad sakte hain kuch kuch aap hin tarah hai ... aapko bhi maaza ayega .. muje maza aya ye poem padke ... chunki mian hindi bahut kam poem padi hain toh muje ye kafi achha laga ..

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  2. achi poem hai yaar.....mujhe lagta hai tu hindi mein jyada acha likhta hai english ke mukablee.....
    nice work keep it on

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  3. Right from the clone of ur heart. I have said clone cz that's ur second attempt :). Third attempt i don't know what will i say. God ..........Otherwise nice poem dude.
    A heart touching one ......keep it up.

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  4. Good Job!
    Keep Trying!!
    Best is yet to come!!!

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  5. Saurabh sahab bahut achhi lagi mujhe tumhari nayee kavita... Keep it up... Nice

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  6. bhai, seriously saying, i was looking for more..as i felt, its short one...i like poems and stories although i cant write..and its first time on ur blog so m really impressed.. nice job shukla ji..keep it up

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  7. एक दिल से लिखी हुई कविता का कोई मुकाबला नहीं होता... यार, जो भी लिखते हो, कहीं न कहीं दिल के तार छु लेते हो !!!! :)
    Keep d gud work goin on.... n i vl request u to spare tym frm ur busy life & write more...

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