It will be only between You and Mine
My love is pure and selfless
don't rate me,
don't compare me,
just feel me.
Down the line
It will be only between You and Mine
My love is like flowing river
don't stop me
don't desert me
make a bridge if possible
Down the line
It will be only between You and Mine
My love is illimitable,
don't ignore me,
don't leave me,
if possible forget me.
Down the line
It will be only between You and Mine
If you feel, do say it
If you don't feel, never regret it
I will love you as I am doing.
Down the line
It will be only between You and Mine
PS: Dedicated to Subbu ,all belonging to one sided true love fraternity(if exists) and
Sup my best friend who inspire me to write.
saurabh bhai....when written....I guess last paragraph will capture the essence of entire poem.....
ReplyDeletegud work
Lots of thing down the line.. down the heart! Right dude...
ReplyDeletewell written. Keep it up!
nice piece of writing ....keep writing more frequently sir.....
ReplyDelete@anant and yogendra: thnks for your encouragement. hope to write more meaningful in future.
ReplyDelete@shwetank: thanks for ur critical feedback.
PS: some people for whom i wrote this poem would read but won't comment.
bhaiya accha to tum likhte hi ho....prem ki itne sunder shabdon me vyakhya...sachmuch tarif ke qabil hai...lekin samasya yeh hai ki logon ko iski kadar hi nahi hai...
ReplyDeleteBhai sach tumhari ye creation toucching hai u have profound thoughts for someone and I think getting rewards for such thoughts is only the final result for a few lucky ones....
ReplyDeleteNice :))))...Very thoughtful...Keep it up!!! Love all ur writings :)
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